Ninja Summer Camp Animatic WIP2

Just a minor update on things. Added textures, and costumes. Changed the camera a bit for the opening shot. Nothing much else that's different from my previous render. I still have yet to light my scenes, and other things.



I used to have all of my scenes in ONE SCENE. When I heard how bad of an idea that was, I decided to take time to split up my scenes into 5 different scenes. That took a while to do, which kinda took some time away from actual work on this. Apparently it's for the best though.

There are still some other things I need to do from when I got critique on my first animatic WIP:

First set needs a bit more. Sign is good, but it just needs more. Maybe some dirt/grass. Faint sirens. Grass should be grassy. Mountains in bg. Clouds.

Voices need to be cleaner...?

Shurikens hitting closer to Moom, Hand comes up sooner, but not too rushed. Shift eyes slightly over, and then back...

Disclaimer goes by, then moom comes out, and house collapses on him. (Still have yet to make house collapse)

Dirt patches under bamboo (Started, didn't finish)

Some sort of Something in the background...